Saturday, October 11, 2014

He's Into Her

Setting: The story happened on June 1999-2003 in Brint International School and in The Barb.
Characters: Maxpein Zin Del Valle- a cool girl who was always bullied by people around her
                   Deib Lohr Enrile- the bully guy
                   Zarnaih Marchessa- bestfriend of Maxpein
                   Lee Roi Gozon- bestfriend of Deib, a kind guy
                   Tobi Yanai- bestfriend of Deib, a funny guy  
                   Kimeniah Sirvey Gozon- cousin of Lee and being courted by Deib
                   Randall Echavez- boyfriend of Dein and ex- girlfriend of Maxpein
                   Dein Leigh Enrile- sister of Deib and current girlfriend of Randall
Climax:  They knew that Randall was the ex-girlfriend of Maxpein and Maxpein was richer than                        anybody in school but an illegitimate child.
Rising action: They bullied Maxpein and did horrible things at her.
Falling action: Deib realized his feelings for Maxpein.
Denoment: They end up being together as lovers but there were hindrances in their relationship.
Plot:
                New school year came in Brint International School (BIS). Many transferees were walking and were going to their respective rooms. Deib noticed a fat girl with an insulting gaze at him so he tripped the fat girl named Maxpein. Maxpein fell down on the floor and students started to laugh at her. She was very shy at that moment. She was very angry at Deib so she gripped Deib’s collar and punched him hard on his face. Deib became angrier but before he can took revenge at Maxpein, Lee and Tobi stopped him and said to let it go. Deib said before he was gone that he will took revenge next time around he see her. From that day, many students also bullied her even her best friend, Naih, was bullied, too.  Students started to do horrible things at her like slapping and kicking her and they said that Maxpein and Naih do not belong in their school because they were not as rich as they are.
                Deib wanted to take revenge at Maxpein so Deib put bubble gums in Maxpein’s hair while she was asleep. Maxpein woke up and noticed the bubble gums in her hair. She was very angry and headed to Deib. She confronted Deib and asked what his problem is but Deib did not answer her. She punched Deib really hard. Kim saw that, walked to Maxpein and slapped her. Before Maxpein leaves, she said that she will do all the things he did to her. From that, their fights continued until the Dean knew it. They were sent to the office and as a punishment they were assigned to report about bullying through powerpoint presentation. They did the powerpoint together nicely beause they had their talk that that day, it’s ceasefire. They present it the next day and the Dean and other stockholders were amazed with their presentation. Since that day, they consider each other neither enemies nor friends.
                Days passed and Deib knew that Kim who she was courting for three years had an affair to Randall, his sister’s boyfriend. Deib was very angry at Kim so he started ignoring her. Randall left Kim and so as Deib. Dein knew it also and slapped Kim. Dein accepted Randall again. After few days, Randall’s dad died. Randall did not show any weakness to people and did not cry even Dein cannot comfort him. Maxpein came and she headed towards Randall. She gave him her hand and embraced him then Randall started to cry. After few days, Randall’s dad was buried in a cemetery. Randall was very sad so he wanted to see Maxpein. He begged at Dein to help her find Maxpein. Dein called Deib to help her. They went to Maxpein’s jobplace named The Barb. They saw Maxpein wiping the floor by her own hands and tiredness was written in his face. Randall confronted Maxpein. That time, they knew that Maxpein was the ex- girlfriend of Randall and the only ex- girlfriend of Randall that Dein was jealous. They also knew that Maxpein was send out of their house because of their relationship of Randall and being kicked out in SIS. They also knew that Maxpein was richer than them and was illegitimate child.
                A month passed and Deib realized that he has feelings for Maxpein. He ignored his feelings. But he was always thinking of Maxpein. Then, he decided to confess to Maxpein and told her that he will court her. Maxpein refused because she doesn’t like Deib. Deib was determined so she asked her a lot of times until she accepted him as his suitor. Deib did a lot of sweet things. Maxpein became her girlfriend. They were happy together but Deib’s great grandfather was not agreeing to their relationship.

(This story was still ongoing and it was very long because it took me 1 week and 3 days reading it non-stop and I suggest you to read this because it’s very good.)



7 comments:

  1. Thanks for this. To tell you honestly im currently working now but i had time to read that story on wp . Though the story and chapters are too long and affecting my daily routine especially on sleeping. But its all worth it. Thanks for the summary, all the questions on my mind are all answered very well. i will read the story again if im not busy.

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  2. What is the theme of He's into Her?

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  3. Thank you so much! The Filipino version is kinda hard to understand, This is much better <3

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  4. what is the conclusion of He's into her?

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  5. what is the conflict of the story?
    I need this for my module

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