Setting: The story happened on June
1999-2003 in Brint International School and in The Barb.
Characters: Maxpein Zin Del Valle-
a cool girl who was always bullied by people around her
Deib Lohr Enrile- the bully guy
Zarnaih Marchessa- bestfriend of Maxpein
Lee Roi
Gozon- bestfriend of Deib, a kind guy
Tobi
Yanai- bestfriend of Deib, a funny guy
Kimeniah
Sirvey Gozon- cousin of Lee and being courted by Deib
Randall
Echavez- boyfriend of Dein and ex- girlfriend of Maxpein
Dein Leigh
Enrile- sister of Deib and current girlfriend of Randall
Climax: They knew that
Randall was the ex-girlfriend of Maxpein and Maxpein was richer than
anybody in school but an illegitimate child.
Rising action: They bullied Maxpein
and did horrible things at her.
Falling action: Deib realized his
feelings for Maxpein.
Denoment: They end up being
together as lovers but there were hindrances in their relationship.
Plot:
New school year came in Brint International School (BIS). Many transferees were
walking and were going to their respective rooms. Deib noticed a fat girl with
an insulting gaze at him so he tripped the fat girl named Maxpein. Maxpein fell
down on the floor and students started to laugh at her. She was very shy at
that moment. She was very angry at Deib so she gripped Deib’s collar and
punched him hard on his face. Deib became angrier but before he can took
revenge at Maxpein, Lee and Tobi stopped him and said to let it go. Deib said
before he was gone that he will took revenge next time around he see her. From
that day, many students also bullied her even her best friend, Naih, was
bullied, too. Students started to do horrible things at her like slapping
and kicking her and they said that Maxpein and Naih do not belong in their
school because they were not as rich as they are.
Deib wanted to take revenge at Maxpein so Deib put bubble gums in Maxpein’s
hair while she was asleep. Maxpein woke up and noticed the bubble gums in her
hair. She was very angry and headed to Deib. She confronted Deib and asked what
his problem is but Deib did not answer her. She punched Deib really hard. Kim
saw that, walked to Maxpein and slapped her. Before Maxpein leaves, she said
that she will do all the things he did to her. From that, their fights
continued until the Dean knew it. They were sent to the office and as a
punishment they were assigned to report about bullying through powerpoint
presentation. They did the powerpoint together nicely beause they had their
talk that that day, it’s ceasefire. They present it the next day and the Dean
and other stockholders were amazed with their presentation. Since that day,
they consider each other neither enemies nor friends.
Days passed and Deib knew that Kim who she was courting for three years had an
affair to Randall, his sister’s boyfriend. Deib was very angry at Kim so he
started ignoring her. Randall left Kim and so as Deib. Dein knew it also and
slapped Kim. Dein accepted Randall again. After few days, Randall’s dad died.
Randall did not show any weakness to people and did not cry even Dein cannot
comfort him. Maxpein came and she headed towards Randall. She gave him her hand
and embraced him then Randall started to cry. After few days, Randall’s dad was
buried in a cemetery. Randall was very sad so he wanted to see Maxpein. He
begged at Dein to help her find Maxpein. Dein called Deib to help her. They
went to Maxpein’s jobplace named The Barb. They saw Maxpein wiping the floor by
her own hands and tiredness was written in his face. Randall confronted
Maxpein. That time, they knew that Maxpein was the ex- girlfriend of Randall
and the only ex- girlfriend of Randall that Dein was jealous. They also knew
that Maxpein was send out of their house because of their relationship of
Randall and being kicked out in SIS. They also knew that Maxpein was richer
than them and was illegitimate child.
A month passed and Deib realized that he has feelings for Maxpein. He ignored
his feelings. But he was always thinking of Maxpein. Then, he decided to
confess to Maxpein and told her that he will court her. Maxpein refused because
she doesn’t like Deib. Deib was determined so she asked her a lot of times
until she accepted him as his suitor. Deib did a lot of sweet things. Maxpein
became her girlfriend. They were happy together but Deib’s great grandfather
was not agreeing to their relationship.
(This story was still ongoing and
it was very long because it took me 1 week and 3 days reading it non-stop and I
suggest you to read this because it’s very good.)
